Biraz ucu açık bırakmışsın, birinci tekil kişinin ağzından yazın bunu yapacağım vs yazıyorum,
I'am going to go Europe this summer. my aunt lives here and Me and My family are going to visit her. I am going to beach, museums, theathers and historical places. Then we come back, I am going to work part-time in a restaurant to raise enough money to buy a new computer.